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Midnight Hour

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At nigh the midnight hour

I thought high upon my life,

'twas there that I found

the reason for my strife.

I tried to explain it

yet not a word came close

to the sweet surrender of the sin-

what held my heart morose.

Lest it be pulled from me

I locked my lips in chain-

hoping I might lose the key

and pray chance, never speak again.

But not another night has passed

I have spent relinquished of the power

that dwells with me-from that night-

nigh upon the midnight hour.
Nigh upon....
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Starkpretty's avatar
<3 <3 <3


OHMYGODAPOEMTHATRHYMESWELLASFGERERRRR-

Well bloody done. I have read SO much bad rhyming poetry on here recently, I felt like there was no-one left to carry the torch. This works, has a Shakespearean ring to it, and it kind of feels a little like a sestina, even though it isn't one.

<3 so much love for this!!!!!

(one thing- nigh, not neigh. Neigh is for horses XD )

Going to go fave this now.